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Tuesday, July 5, 2016

Writing Blog Commenting ... Before and After

Blog Commenting... Before and After

We have seen the comments that we have mucked up on and we want to share them with you (for some reason ) But we have also seen the comments where we have done really well so any way here are the comments!




Before:Thanks Katie and Riki because they put everything out of their way for us so thank you,plus I love the photos





Yeah I did a bad comment because I mucked up but I have improved on this one.





Kia Ora Koutou,Mackenzie here.
I miss Mrs Tapuke but I am glad that she has moved on besides im sure Mrs Tapuke is having a great time and I am sure she will remember us from our special gifts.
I think our next step is to take it forward with the post because we are just saying how her time went,but I will say that this post is great keep up the good work!

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