We are learning to edit our work
anything in colour has been improved
So anyway today I made a little slide of a story with a friend of mine Hannah.O hope you enjoy!
Thursday, November 24, 2016
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Hi Mackenzie,
ReplyDeleteI Am A year 6 student from Tautoro School You guys did an awesome job with your story I like how use used amazing words in your story and how use described the monster in the story. One thing I thought you could add is maybe to have a better title like a smart learner framework To get people hooked to your story. If you dont know what a smart learner framework is here is a link to my blog ive got a post on my blog of what a smart learner framework is. http://tsiversonp.blogspot.co.nz/ Keep the good work up.